This made a really good that I enjoyed very much. I like how you told a story and the feeling in the poem.

5/5

Thanx babe.

I haven't properly been on here since 2010, so forgive me if i don't know what I'm talking about!:)

I liked it. I think it was original and like the above comment - it told a story. There was a lot of emotion used, so I hope it helped you to feel better by getting it out. However, one problem I found was that it didn't flow very well, so that's something to work on I guess. :) Otherwise i really liked it. Keep it up x