Keep Holding On

by H. Elizabeth   Apr 22, 2012


Everything is always my fault,
I'm so full of shame.
Another person I cared about is lost,
I'm the one to blame.

So I take a deep breath,
And I struggle to keep my head above the water.
There's nothing of me left,
I can't hold on much longer.

I'm wondering and lost,
I wish to be gone.
I hate myself most,
But I must keep holding on.

For there are people who do love me,
There are people who care.
So for them I will hold on,
And let go of my fears.

** Not very well written; just venting my feelings. **

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  • 12 years ago

    by Reyna

    Dont loose hope because of one lost person. you got it right holding on to the fact that there still are people here that love you. dont let one loss stop you from achieving happiness.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Its really nice to see something from you Han. I hope this will get you writing again, maybe a happier one next time, but this will do for the mean time, lol, nah, just kidding, like I said, really nice.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    It is so much easier to put the blame
    on somebody else, instead taking
    responsibilty and recognizing the fact
    that nobody is perfect, we all made mistakes. Don't let that ruin your spirit
    or doubting yourself. Afterall, there are
    a few people in your corner who do love you

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