Like a broken record, them words sound so familiar

"Is it sick to say I love it,
when your mean to me."
your--you're
And add a question mark to that emotion-filled stanza.

"Like a broken record ,
All we do is scream."

I agree with Dagmar, this piece--it's message, the words--they've been used before in different lights and angles. But what I so love about this piece is the way my heart beat faster when I read the concluding lines. The repetition of that line just made this poem so sinister and melancholic. Great write 5/5 :)

-X

This is very nice
"It never really changes,
Same old routine.
Like a broken record ,
All we do is scream."
I love those lines, and i love the way u pictured that kind of relations in poetry ,So sad,Full of emotions gr8 choice of words and easy flow u get the 5/5 for sure keep on good work =)