by Lioness Apr 22, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Rusty and scarred, |
by SMILEatHEART
Excellent work! Im speechless. |
by SMILEatHEART
Excellent work! Im speechless. |
I loved how the piece told the story of the titanic and I liked the facts you put into the poem as it really makes the reader think about what happened. This is a thought provoking piece that really grabs the reader. |
by L
The titanic was a captivating story and sad one as well. This poem is captivating too and it also shares important information to the reader and that's what I like the most that it was done in a poetic way. |
by Maple Tree
Liz- You have captivated me with this historic vision of the titanic.... touching and heart teary piece.... |