Comments : My Last Mistake

  • 12 years ago

    by Reyna

    I can really see the emotion in you poem, i can reakky connect to >"A smile's an effort
    to conceal my thoughts.
    Feelings trapped in a heart
    that cannot be unlocked."5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Smile is message of assurance.. When it's high time, summary arrives.. What's meant for you, shall not bore you.. Keep moving forward lest you lose.. Be strong, for a good turn awaits.. Good job..

  • 12 years ago

    by Shades of Gray

    Thank you! Moving forward can be hard, but I try my best.
    ~Shades of Gray

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Very good poem i like the flow filled with emotion i can relate to this poem :)

    • 12 years ago

      by Shades of Gray

      Thank you so much! It's one of my favorites that I've written!
      ~Shades of Gray

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Monroe92

    Very well written.. i can really connect to all your emotions. i can tell your sad and angry all at once. keep it up!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Vermilion

    Very well done. Above all, please know that you're not alone. There is always someone who wants to help.

  • 10 years ago

    by Philophobia

    Wow soooo good! I love this poem, it is just perfect in every way!

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love how easily this poem glowed and its like every single emotion just welcomed itself into the reader. This poem is beautifully flawless!