I can really see the emotion in you poem, i can reakky connect to >"A smile's an effort
to conceal my thoughts.
Feelings trapped in a heart
that cannot be unlocked."5/5

Smile is message of assurance.. When it's high time, summary arrives.. What's meant for you, shall not bore you.. Keep moving forward lest you lose.. Be strong, for a good turn awaits.. Good job..

Thank you! Moving forward can be hard, but I try my best.
~Shades of Gray

Very good poem i like the flow filled with emotion i can relate to this poem :)

Very well written.. i can really connect to all your emotions. i can tell your sad and angry all at once. keep it up!!

Very well done. Above all, please know that you're not alone. There is always someone who wants to help.

Wow soooo good! I love this poem, it is just perfect in every way!

I love how easily this poem glowed and its like every single emotion just welcomed itself into the reader. This poem is beautifully flawless!