by Angel Apr 23, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Open the book, |
by ZinaZonic
Really touching, i had to hold back tears, the emotion was incredible. |
by Angel
Aw thank you :) |
by Burning Angel
Wow, this poem kept me reading from start to finish, and it takes alot to actually keep my attention like that. You held so much emotion in all of your words and it made it easy to feel every emotion that you were feeling. Your poem really hit hard for me because i seemed to understand exactly what you mean, the only difference is, i never wrote it in a journal or anything. But, this poem really affected me. You done a great job |
by UtterlyAlive
This poem is amazing, I read yours and then I read mine but they just don't compare, your are simply amazing. I don't see how this can possibly be improved! |
by WintersAngel
This poem is so beautiful. I love how it feels as though you are telling a story. Great poem. |
by Angel
To me poems are supposed to tell stories so thats what i try to do in all of mine :) thank you |
by Joseph Boadi
Diction great,content touchy,rhymes nailed.great piece.i could relate to that |