I loved how this piece had that touch of hope and inspirstion to it, that's the image you get of skyscrapers isn't it, that tall feeling of strength.

Definately a great piece, with smooth flow and wording that fit well.

Great Chesley
xxx

Hmmmmmm....Damm that was good.....Ummmmm not good but GREAT....i have to admit that I never thought I would like a piece about a skyscraper lol but this is fantastic....chels you got a new fan :-) 5/5 all freaking day long! X

Beautiful write, Chels...

The beauty of this is much higher than skyscrapers.

Chelsey this is beautiful. The images are awesome.

So many times I would go to my work and would look out the windows and watch the clouds and storms roll in. It was awesome. There would be glass windows surrounding us so it was like 360 degree view. I simply loved this poem because it reminded me of that. There was a sad tone in the writing which I felt, and loved!

Awesome write!

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I think its quite interesting how the views of nature cluttered and "dirtied" the world. How the hidden powers of earth seemed to make it all ...imperfect. Although, I do like the way you made one of man's structures seem like a vision of hope, and beauty. More than what's in the world we all don't always see. A switch on the escape idea. So well done, in this write. Well done