Oh Yaki,

This was like such a great piece, I felt the sadness, it started of with some sense of hope, and it just got sadder and the ending was perfection.

How love can be so perfect but we become so disfunctional and cannot see what is there.

WOW
Loved this
x

I love the the way you write your piece here...very emotional and powerful..i feel the sadness, the hope after the relationship came out into darkness because of something you didn't trust him... in your side, isn't right? It's very difficult to think that all was gone because of foolishness...i really really like this stuff...very great job!