Fine line I walk.

"Why must I be so good at looking elated,
When really my light is far past faded."
---I found this really relatable to me right now. When I read this, I thought you were writing this for me!! lol

"Consciously wanted everyone to think I'm
fine,
Behind closed doors wishing one person
noticed
Thefine line I walk...
Will I crumble?"
---This is the core of the poem. It really stands out. Very well-written. But never lose faith.
Great work. Keep writing :)
-X

Consciously wanted everyone to think I'm fine,
Behind closed doors wishing one person noticed
The fine line I walk...

^^ this line spoke up to me, it's really sad how we can pretend that we are allright but deep down we are breaking slowly until that one someone notices and breaks us completely to finally put the pieces together.

This is amazing i know that feeling , I really enjoyed reading this , i love the flow its simple and easy 5/5 keep on =)

Never five up your Faith in God
he feels your pain and hear your cry
he has not left you yet
excellent, enjoyed it