Comments : April showers

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Wow!

    Tuesday morning April showers,
    the day is grey these lonely hours.
    That pass by i count them all.
    it seems such a long haul.
    It will soon be you and me,
    walking laughing feeling free.
    Its all i want for us to be,
    with each other.
    just us three.

    ^^
    Wow!
    The rhymeing in each line was really great loved it.
    Waiting for that day, counting the hours waiting for the day when it will be you and me Wow!

    Really beautiful poem
    That gave me goosebumps
    5/5

    X

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    After the showers comes the sunshine x

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    You are the sunshine in my life sweetheart.XX