This is beautiful but there is one small mistake in
"Eager to feed off they're happiness..."
they're should be their
other than that its amazing in every way i personally like the flow and the word choice
and the story of the poems i so emotional and sad and i love it too
5/5 keep on the good work =)

Okay.. You told me you wrote this last night.. did you have a few drinks? lol jk.. There are some typos:

"Smiles for all who she pass's,"
pass's--passes

"Bright eyed eager to hear,"
add a hyphen between bright and eyed.

"Flash's, moments long past."
flash's--flashes

"Happily wiping the sleep from her eye's."
eye's--eyes

Put all that aside, you have here a beautifully-penned piece. I so envy you right now.. I stay up all night and don't come up with a masterpiece like this. I mean, the punctuation is well-placed, something you do expertly, with ease, making the reader read the piece with a great rhythm. The story---so captivating and mesmerizing!! Amazing write as always. 5/5 without a doubt :)

-X

A great poem Jenn. I do like this and the others you have written. So much feeling there and depth. Wow! A great write!