You will never be alone, you will always have yourself to love.

perfect poem....

L.ove brings lots of Joy, as well many tears
along with pain. It takes time, eventually
pain becomes manageable. Don't close your heart, weigh your options, moving
towards something better who deserves
you. It's like if you let a bird fly and it will
return it was yours to begin with. 5/5

Part of this poem was of course sad especially when you're talking about the demise of a relationship but then it hits you with this unbelievable strength in the end which is awesome. I love when poems do that. It gives you this awesome feeling inside and it did for me.

Awesome write hun. Loved the setout of your poem and the flow. It worked well.

x

Gorgeous piece Chels!

I have to agree with Liz, this poem does have a sad touch, but that isn't what dominates, it is the fact that the speaker has found a way to grow due to what happened, which sounds easier than it is done, but there is so much will in the tone, that I'm sure it will work out.

Same here,

I was surprised to see the twist in this piece.
Since I started reading it, I thought that it will continue being sad and later there it goes the cheerful tone and one that says: yes! I will move on.