Sun and Moon

by Lofallenve   Apr 24, 2012


Our love is like that
Of the chase of the
Sun and moon.

Left pursuing and watching
the other fade.

Until granted a single
night of an eclipse.
A single night of bliss.

Soon the morning
tears us apart,

leaving us in
the chase of the
Sun and Moon.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Veamm

    Greetings

    I like the fact you penned this poem short. It is sweet and lovely. You described what is love really well by using the Sun-Moon. Which made the readers feel the poem.

    Overall it is brilliant.

    5 for me.

    Keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    :)Great Poem!

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