Ness (Birthday Poem)

by Veamm   Apr 24, 2012


Ness (Acrostic)

New hours of your life.
Expanding your oppurtunities.
Strives of past and turn them right.
Search now for possibilities.

Go and get your neccesities
Rule your own world, mold it.
Extend, grasp your dreams.
End the dilemmas, end it.
Now is your day, to begin with.

Blessings rains from above.
Unending paths of goals.
Exciting day, Your day of love.
Notice the given roles.

Employ your soul, Your heart.
Virtues are given by God.
Ensure your life and your part.
Now is happiness, and not to be sad.

Tranquility must be seen.
Unseen future will be found today.
Real life that you want.
Are here, Your day. Your (Happy) Birth day.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    This is a really sweet dedication. I hope you let that person read this. My only advice perhaps is the placing of periods in the end of each line, making some lines sentence fragments. Other than that, great piece. You not only managed to write it for that person, but anyone who reads this would feel the emotion you've put here for that person. Keep writing :)
    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Wow..I will dedicate this to myself on my bday. This is a very inspirational poem to someone for their birthday. Very well written

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Lol, thank you!
    It's not my birthday but phew, I sure felt like it was. You are right we should smile and don't think that we are aging. We should just feel happy about it. I mean it means that we have live one more year.

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