by Veamm Apr 24, 2012
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Problems |
by Paul Gondwe
I felt the content and message of the poem was good. I would suggest you not capitalize some letters which are clearly continuing from a previous line, that kinda messes up the flow of the poem. I would also suggest you put commas where necessary. Overall, this is a great poem. |
by Wicked Ways
Wow, i really liked the message that you conveyed here and also how you conveyed it, problems.. some are easy some are hard, i like how you incorporated that in this poem . tthis is a very good and relate-able poem .......so nice work keep it up :) |
by Xanthe
This poem holds a nice message. I only wish you've added punctuation, like a question mark here: |
by Max
"Pressure me please |
by Jenn
I like this because it speaks simple truth of life--Blunt and to the point. |