Problems

by Veamm   Apr 24, 2012


Problems

Think of something new
Cause, I'd been there and done that
I've seen everything too
Sure, I've done a lot

Pressure me please
Calculate my Math
I'm doing it easy
Give me everything you got

It might be too hard for you
And, for sure it troubles you
But, what can I do
It might be easy if you have a clue

Problems, Oh problems
You can hide, Yet it is clear
Problems, Oh problems
It is annoying that's what I hear

It is infinite and random
Some are easy, some are hard
We are born to have those
Life isn't simple and that's one its parts

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  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I felt the content and message of the poem was good. I would suggest you not capitalize some letters which are clearly continuing from a previous line, that kinda messes up the flow of the poem. I would also suggest you put commas where necessary. Overall, this is a great poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Wow, i really liked the message that you conveyed here and also how you conveyed it, problems.. some are easy some are hard, i like how you incorporated that in this poem . tthis is a very good and relate-able poem .......so nice work keep it up :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    This poem holds a nice message. I only wish you've added punctuation, like a question mark here:
    "But, what can I do"
    A period on the first line here:
    "It might be easy if you have a clue
    Problems, Oh problems"
    So it would be easier to read and understand.
    The title: when I read it, I thought this was going to be about life problems, perhaps something inspirational etc. and it is. the incorporation of 'Math' is predictable. This is a nice piece, if you just used something else, it would stand out more. So it's an average poem.
    "Problems, Oh problems"---this seems to add to its musical quality. I'm not too keen on it, but I don't hate it.
    Overall, still a good read.
    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    "Pressure me please
    Calculate my Math
    I'm doing it easy
    Give me everything you got"
    Like these part haha good poem 5/5 keep on=)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenn

    I like this because it speaks simple truth of life--Blunt and to the point.
    There will always be another problem, big or small.

    "Give me everything you got"
    I love the challenge here, tell the world to bring it.
    Nicely done.

    5/5
    Jenn