by L
This is really cool, |
by Lioness
In my mind when reading this I'd imagine someone who was with someone, then they left physically but their memories and hurtful actions are still with you. The pain will always be there as well as the anger but you will not miss that about them. I could be wrong. I love the way you have writen this though, simple and I also love the way you ended it. Direct. |
by nouriguess
Ah - may - zing ! |
by Alanis
The feel of this poem goes out to the readers. Good work |