I love poems written in the old english style of writing and this is no exception. You didn't overdo it like I've read others do, this one flowed easy and smoothly. Awesome old world poetry Lofallenve. I so enjoyed this poem from you. Take Care
Lostlove

Thank you so much for the comment. I was thinking of maybe changing a few lines, but I like how it is. :)

I liked this poem, not the style of poem that I would normally read, but this one really stood out as well worth reading! You've gained a new convert!
This must of been a very tricky poem to write (way beyond me!), and I think it is a great poem.
Keep on writing them in this style. They are great!

I dare say this poem has taken my breath away. YOU have a way with your words and i believe that's why when you speak to me im captivated by you. wonderful poem dear. Very different from your norm and I'm sure Shakespeare would be impressed as well (whom ever he really was, you know what i mean;) )

Wooow this is really gr8 poem u wrote
its hard to write a poem like that
u have got talent
5/5 i wish i could give u more =)