Comments : My Evergreen

  • 12 years ago

    by Illusion

    Wow!!!! I'll copy this and copy it to my folder.. I can't afford to lose such a brilliant work of yours.. Kudos!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Nice poem, well written, you did agreat job on this one, love the way you think, keep it up,,,tdr

  • 12 years ago

    by William Mae

    A beautiful poem, our world is ever changing, and sadly not for the better, nature is attacked on every front, I love the style you chose for writing this piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by SMILEatHEART

    Amazing! I love this so much as the way i love the nature. Because through nature we can see the beauty of are Lord who created this world. God bless you more sweetie :))

  • 12 years ago

    by Akerele1 Segun22

    Kudos to you,my powerful poetic comrade. This is actually nothing but a plausible piece. Shabash.Remain blessed.

  • 12 years ago

    by Gloria

    Very strong vocabulary and highly expressive,speaks for itself,nice job.:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Shinobi

    One of the best poem I got to read about passion to nature in a long time. You started the poem with expression of love towards a woman. This love you described is deep and warm. As nature used to surround us, islands of people in a sea of creatures. We know surround it, as islands of nature habitats surrounded by a sea of people.

    The act humanity made to nature was described ruthlessly and cold. Nature was raped by us, used by us with no remorse. You passed those feelings in a very strong way.

    Beside the fact that I prefer poems with a different style, this piece is with no doubt an exception.

    Marvelous work 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Victoria

    Very beautiful poem! :)

    I plan to read more of your work!!

    ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Alexandra Jozelia

    Simply Amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Its really really nice dearie....such nice word..such a nice description....i simply loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep up good writing!!
    5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    A delightful read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tina

    Wooaaahhhh!!!!what a great poem!!!! just luv it. Keep it up! all the best!

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is realy beautiful.....the wordin was realy beautiful....u r a great writer...

  • 12 years ago

    by Half Husband Half father

    I jst loved it, you nailed it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    WOW......

    sums it up pretty well

    keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Light

    A beautiful poem well written. I really enjoy reading it. Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sora

    Very beautiful indeed! such an interesting and rare topic. i loved it all. excellent choice of words, just beautifully written. 5/5

    Ash

  • 12 years ago

    by Special K

    This has such beauty, well done I loved ever second of it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by honeybump

    Wow. Your poems are beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow, first poem I come back to read and I get this amazing piece :), look forward to reading more of yours