Breathless

by Kitty Kurse   Apr 25, 2012


I try to capture air within my lungs,
But I cannot see my legs are spun-
Up, in what many people see-
As love.
My eyes are wide open and the only thing I see is you,
Not even the deep blue behind me captures my attention.
For the rest of my life I could say that I am done,
And that I've completed what I wanted;
That I have won.
Why you may ask?
Because I have found the one,
The one that leaves me breathless.
The one that I can lay my head to rest,
Where I can close my eyes and capture the wonderful feeling of love.
I've won what most people want to capture,
I've captured a love-
A true love,
A breathless love.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Nella Khatsune

    Magnificent poem, extremely love it(:
    Seems so true of how love is :3
    I love it. This will be on my favorites<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Salina Is Beautiful

    Love the last line it rlly gave the poem a nice ending
    5/5
    <3 salina

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    I love this piece
    the flow is cool and the word choice is nice too gr8 one 5/5 =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Beautiful, beautiful poem. I know what it is like to have that true, breathless love. I loved this one so much. My new favorite. <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is a great poem. i love it!!

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