If Only

by Amber   Apr 25, 2012


If only I had waited
Then you wouldn't be so frustrated
If only you had stayed
Then I wouldn't be fading away
If only your heart were true.
Then maybe i wouldn't be blue.
If only you'd kill me quickly
Then maybe you'd soon forget me
If only the waves would take me away
Them maybe I'd live life another day
If only i were in your arms
I wouldnt be so torn apart
If only you would hold me closely
I wouldn't be oh so lonely.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    I think you focused too much on trying to rhyme its seems kind of forced which blocks off the flow. But it is very touching and sweet:)
    Keep writing.

    • 12 years ago

      by Amber

      Thank you

  • 12 years ago

    by Alexander

    Wow very sad poem it's just no one deserve real love in this world

    keep it up good job

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Very touching poem.... touched my heart.. good work

    • 12 years ago

      by Amber

      Aww thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by Amber

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