by Amber Apr 25, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
If only I had waited |
by Kitty Kurse
I think you focused too much on trying to rhyme its seems kind of forced which blocks off the flow. But it is very touching and sweet:) |
by Amber
Thank you |
by Alexander
Wow very sad poem it's just no one deserve real love in this world |
by Boy
Very touching poem.... touched my heart.. good work |
by Amber
Aww thanks |
by Amber
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