Nana, Never do you fail to amaze me, I found this piece very inspiring, and I felt you were talking to another part of you, a part of you that is loved...

I wasn't sure if this was actually about someone in your life, or metaphorical...
but either way it was beautifully written as always

and the imagery and wording very contrasting and smooth, I loved the gentle rhymes and the way you incorporated them into your style.

Loved it
mwah
xxxx

I love this completely!

I feel as though you're trying to say that this person you are with makes you want to be a better person (though I think you're marvelous already) Maybe you like the way they see you rather than the way you see yourself. I loved the rhyming of it, it flowed so well and everything just melted into each other. Beautifully writen! I love it!!!

x

Wow..great piece, love the metaphors in this poem..great!

Nana, you rhyme everything! God damn this write! How beautiful and just soft!