Hidden Emotions

by Kitty Kurse   Apr 26, 2012


Sometime when I speak,
It's like no one can ever hear me.
Almost as if I was a ghost, old, see-through, and weak.
When I'm talking to your face, do you even see,
That deep inside you are really hurting me?

I've lost all of my friends, but I did not know.
So when I came to school-
It was like I was new and everyone was my foe.
Things were not the same at all,
They made it seem like everyone wanted me to fall,
Things were not the same im done,
They made it seem like everything did,
Was odd, and abnormal,
Was it worth losing even you best friend? No and I will tell you this,
Did you learn from your mistakes?
My mother would ask and I will say yes,
Did you learn from your mistakes?
My mother would ask and fill me with so much hate.
And I will scream yes!

And I will tell her this,
And that I have learned and that If i had just one wish,
I would wish to go back in time and fix what a mess my life is in.
I would flip it, and change it, and remove all of my sins. But until then I will lay my head and wait for my life to end.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Xanthe

    First of all, it's not worth taking away your life..
    "Sometime(s) when I speak,
    It's like no one can [ever] hear me."
    ---Add the ones I placed in a parenthesis and remove the ones I placed in a bracket. It would flow much better that way, in my opinion..
    "Almost as if I was a ghost, old, see-through,
    and weak."
    ---This is a new perspective in my part to see a ghost. Yes, I've imagined ghosts to be see-through, but most of them (in my head) are not old and weak. I imagine a ghost is a human's essence, and not all people who die are old and weak.
    "WhenI'm talking to your face, do you even
    see,
    That deep inside (me) you are really hurting me?"
    ---There are some people who are rather very blunt, sometimes being blunt makes a person arrogant..
    "So when I came to school-
    It was like I was new and everyone was my
    foe."
    ---I like that you gave this a setting and the piece seem to be in an orderly fashion, yet abstract, in a way that you're giving the reader an insight to what you are feeling..
    "They made it seem like everything (I) did[,]
    Was odd, and abnormal,"
    ---I've felt this way some time in the past. It's not the best feeling, I know..
    "My mother would ask and (I would be) filled (me) with so
    much hate."
    ---ehh.. sometimes and most likely, mothers know best :D
    Overall, a nice write to let out all your feelings.. But holding grudges isn't the best way to be angry. You can be angry once in a while, but learn to accept, move on and just let go. Keep writing. 5
    -X

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