Above..

by Dreamofolwin   Apr 26, 2012


Love doesn't always happen
in a way that we have planned.
But when it does a chord is struck
between a woman and a man.

Two hearts become united,
two souls are set free...
No distance can diminish it,
love travels land or sea.

It can feel the silent beatings,
of it's true love's heart..
And the gentle pulsating,
of which it is a part.

Taking body and mind,
it consumes, yet sets free.
As two spirits soar above
..................to eternity.

* A poem I once wrote, but just submitting now.
~ One pulled out of the hat! :D

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Olwin

    Saw you online and thought I would say hello by commenting on one of your lovely poems.

    This is lovely and is a true testament to the power love has sometimes. It doesn't always turn out this way, but when it does.....:)

    Super write and all the best,
    Ben

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Splendid Write Olwin.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Oh, this is really awesome written piece. I agree with the above mention. This poem is really great and love the flow of the words you used in subtle way. Love it. Well-penned:)
    -C

  • 12 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    I enjoyed your hat trick, and the Poem was outstanding.
    "As two Spirits soar above
    ..................to Eternity".

    Peace and Blessings

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    How true and beautiful! Love does not just happen and when it does it goes through great length to keep it alive...from start to end each verse had vivid imagery and it left me with a smile...loved the read :)

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