Comments : My Only Regret

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This piece is incredible. When we have a good friend rather a best friend and things don't go the way they are supposed to and we lose contact is painful because we still have the memories and we miss them. I can see what why is call my only regret and I love the title along with the content.

    Excellent, I could feel your voice and I can relate to this. I don't want this to happen to me and my best friend. THANK YOU!!! for writing this, I need to fix things up.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    No matter how close the Friendship is
    at times we mess up, hey nobody is perfect.
    Also, a true Friend will forgive your mistake
    and the bond may become stronger. Reach out while you can

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    When you lose contact with a good friend it really hurts I know that feeling, hope things get better:)
    Amazing poem Liz:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    :-( this poem hits me hard- I can relate to this piece... the poem Liz is so elegant and captivating... the flow is pretty...and it just makes a person sigh at the end...very heartfelt piece..

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem is so sad :( I think we all have a broken relationship with someone and wonder where they are now and what they are doing and are they thinking of us. Your poem sums the situation up so well. I love how your work is relateable and emotional.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    "What is a friend? A single soul, dwelling in two bodies"
    >a definition by Aristotle...

    >Friendship is the relationship sharing love, respect and loyalty to each other..and tribulation of struggles, comforts and commitments to know each other either in bad or better..but, sometimes we can't avoid mistakes..we're not perfect...and real friend is the one who understands the imperfection of her/his friend...

    With you, it was like
    those days
    when the moon
    was still visible in
    the bluest of skies ,

    everything was
    so clear.

    I could hear your
    voice and though
    we were miles away,
    we were bound
    by our friendship.

    >>Yet, my idea here...as a friend you feel ease and comfortable with her even you feel gloom..she made you smile...
    I like the way you write here:
    "moon
    was still visible in
    the bluest of skies"....well-penned and the imagery is brilliant...

    I wonder,
    if I hadn't ruined
    things, where
    would we be now.

    Are you thinking
    of me, the way
    that I am thinking
    of you.

    I miss you
    my sunshine,
    you are
    my only regret.

    >>So touchy.."I miss you my sunshine you are my only regret"...I like the way you use "SUNSHINE"...because in this quoted word means she is the one who lights your life...very sweet and tender..i really really love this...and learned a lesson from here that I must value my friend and the friendship we handled..thanks for this ma'am..one of my fav too..this is splendidly written..and you got deserve to rate of 100 of 100...