This is a cute little poem, sweet too. In the longer lines, where the capital letters are, you should make that the next line. Just looks a little funny. I like how you turn it around. It starts off with dreams, which are fueled by emotions [the next part] and emotions come from the heart [next] and love comes from the heart too. Good. :)

I love this poem. lol it's cute and not something I would expect from a guy. I like how you mixed love dreams and teh heart as a whole. very nicly put together.