by Elise Apr 28, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I begin this story with the word girl |
by Elise
Thank you*.* That's very kind of you :) |
by Omar aka Amor
I loved it! |
by Amy
Oh elise beautiful rhyming! It just flows from one line to the next! That was very beautifully written... But shame the poor girl!! |
by Elise
Thank you! I had a task to write about Auschwitz after my visit and I decided to use a story of one of the girls and put it into the poem. As in Auschwitz many had killed themselves by sharp objects, exotion or frowing themselves onto electric wires because work was too tiering. They lived in awful conditions and even 1 poem will never describe all the horror that I saw there! Every time I remember it I cry it was awful! :'( |
by Amy
Oh elise beautiful rhyming! It just flows from one line to the next! That was very beautifully written... But shame the poor girl!! |
by Faith Ann
Very descriptive! good job :) |
by Elise
Thank you very much :) |