by Elise Apr 28, 2012
category :
Life, society /
other
'Daddy I love you' this was my first phrase. |
by Elise
Thank you very much:) your views are very impotant to me :) Feel free to correct me anytime ;) |
by Alanis
Love it!!!!<3 |
by Moonlit Candles
I thought this was a great poem. You really expressed a lot of emotion here of pain and sorrow. All in all a great write. :) |
by Amy
Very nice poem... Very emotional... And I can understand what u meant about the stanzas... How are mine going By The Way? |
by Elise
Yours are very good Amy and thank you very much for your coments they have inspired me to write my new poem. (I have alredy posted it) |
This is very well written and you have conveyed the strong emotions well. I can relate to this, to an extent. I really like this one though :D |