Comments : Salvation

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    God can and does hear us and indeed he does answer in his own magical way.
    Where the Anger is concerned, we all do get
    angry at some point, I feel Anger blinds us from the truth. Very intersting piece you wrote. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Interesting piece, I was not expecting the ending.

    And I havent thought about salvation for someone who have died... I mean I guess in a way, it could be true, but now I'm thinking about those people who might reborn in a new being... Could that be the salvation and gods way of hearing them?

    Wow! Really awesome piece, it got me thinking.
    I like that it's express as in a story of an event and how it feels that we are reading someone's thoughs.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh my sister is so in love with Pride and Prejudice. I haven't seen the originals, she's begged me to though.

    I love that this poem makes me feel about two different era's. One where it's more modern day and the other, in the time of Pride and Prejudice. I mean at the beginning of the poem you are talking about leftover pizza and then towards the end the language changes but you have done this so well. I simply love that. Awesome write darls!

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