With due respect, I think the titles will look better if you don't capitalize the whole letters, and the poem if you divide it into stanzas. But that's just a suggestion. :)

Hmm.. the capitalization does make the title 'stand out' and make this piece 'stronger'.. But in terms of the guidelines, it is stated that you should: "NOT submit texts in CAPITAL LETTERS.", unless it is needed in the poem, perhaps?
Anyway, when I first read it, I agree with Luce, it should be in stanzas to read better, but as you've said, it's hard to when you're using your phone, so I'll let that slide.
I like the poem itself for the topic it presents. I grew up with a family, so devoted, and we do penitence every holy week. So this is relatable to me..
"As a lantern (.)To lighten myopic
eyes"---to be honest, I wasn't expecting a metaphor like that, but it's a great surprise, I like finding treasures like this in poems, making this piece stand out. The period was unnecessary, so I suggest it be eradicated to keep the flow smooth.
Overall, I like it. Really well-done, sir. Keep writing
-X