Aww this is so cute jake! Whatta lucky girl. ;) Hope you two can stay together happy and strong ;p

Great piece. The emotion is clear and strong. It's very obvious how much she means to you and I'm glad that you were able to write such a magnificent piece. I'm also glad that you are happy again. The piece was short, or felt short, but it says a lot. Good job with the word choice and incorporating your own voice. I really like the style you used and the flow was pretty smooth.

Excellent job.

~MRK

Great poem 5/5

Very cute and romantically written, great piece",

Very cute and romantically written, great piece",

You and Britt better stay together bro. :) I love you two together. I love you bro and I love this poem. 5/5 :D

Anytime Jakie. :D <3