My gosh I wrote a comment but it disappeared... I just noticed your home country is Jordan. That's pretty cool :) But in regards to your poem you're not alone. I am exactly like you are, wearing my heart on my sleeve and emotions exposed. I understand...

I liked how you described in this you waer your emotions like clothes I thought that was a very clever way of describing how you show your emotions and I can relate to that. I thought this poem was written well actually. But I think in the 4th line in the first stanza you meant crime instead of "rime". But nice write. :)

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