by Jenna Bella Oldridge Apr 29, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
No remedy |
No remedy |
by Lioness
Problem without a solution. Man this title alone can relate to so many people. Even without reading the rest of the poem I know that this is something I can relate to. |
Often we find ourselves in situation |
by Jenni
Due to the fact that there is no punctuation whatsoever I found myself reading this poem of yours qith a kind of quick pace, which felt too energetic too me and didn't really display the mood of the poem well. That is why I would recommend you to add some punctuation. I think that you really had to get this out and I can literally feel the urge you had to share this because being in that situations causes quite some frustration, but I believe after all that you will find a solution and will eventually get out of it again. |