Wow i love this
the way it ended with a question was fantastic
good write
5/5 keep on =)

I really liked this piece because its about life, and I love the metaphor you used in this and how you started it "Sitting in the back seat of this car,
This ride called life can take me very far." its a good start for this poem and the ending was good too, that's life I guess huh , all these road blocks and red lights...but awesome poem hon

LOVE the metaphors in this. life is definitely a ride, you hit many road blocks, red lights, and stop signs... AWESOME poem. 5/5