Living sub tropic - senryu

Omg I love this

3 lines but it was so clear on what it was saying(:
Great poem larry(:

5/5!

Wow didn't think ice cream trucks did that. But then again even when it's cold people crave ice cream. :p

Lol This was a great poem. It actually reallly stood out. It made me wonder, "How is he going to make this funny?" Then just this simple lines of words. Such a hot summer but the ice cream truck never came your way. Thought this was done well and structured very well. Great job. :)

Well, short but definitely meaningful...

I love this simple, awesome poem. Firstly, I get so excited when the sounds of the ice cream trucks come around at the park or the beach in Summer. As soon as I hear the music I look at how much money I have and think about what type of ice cream to get. With sprinkles, without? With choc topping (my fav) or with a flake mmm maybe all of the above lol

I love the image of summertime in this poem. It never flew south - I can sense the hint of sarcasm in this as well as the first two lines. Who wouldn't be excited over it! I loved this!

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