While you sleep I'll pop off my head,
your worst nightmare, while you lay in your bed.

^^ nice imaginary on this poem, I like the imaginary the most on this one.

Popping off heads, my worst nightmare, it made me feel like I was there. ~ Chills sent to my body. ~

Ok, the only clown I was ever kinda freaked out by was the clown from IT the movie - until now lol This poem kinda freaked me out it's awesome. I love the images as they are so descriptive and clear. If I don't sleep tonight I'll know why! My sister is afraid of clowns and so is my niece. It's amazing how people get freaked out by them.

This is such a dark but awesome poem. Loved the rhyming! Thought it was great!!!

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Haha.. Liz, yeah.

Same here. IT IT I can't get over that clown.
it really freaked me out.

From what I have gathered from this piece
there is also mean clowns hiding behind
that Big Smile.

-gaps instantaneous chills- Loved it!

What i have always liked about your poems has been how you make your words rhyme and your choice of them. Here is another piece that i feel could be a winner.