This poem talks about the life in general, the cave resembles the real life, and it looks scary from outside and no body dare to enter it but you must enter it because it's not in your hand, it's semi-allegorical and symbolical poem hope you like it.

I thought this was a great poem. It was really neat with the description of the cave. Only a few pointers. When rhyming watch for how many syllables you're using to rhyme with. You could have maybe 6 on one line, but then 11 on another. When that happens it makes the words seem forced. For instance:

Who would dare to enter the cave
Unless he knows that it's just an illusion
And he defiantly knows he will come out safe from the cave
And no one would make substitution

You could actually just take out " from the cave". It will still rhyme and the syllables will flow better. And the only other thing I saw is just a misspelled word. You said defiantly. It is spelled definitely. Other than that great write. :)

I enjoyed this... Life always seems scary. You start out life in the dark, not knowing where you are going to go. You find a steady job, place to live and you see the light. Finally everything seems to fall into place and fit perfectly. Fully exposed in the light. The next decision is the one that puts you back into the dark or keeps you in the light... Very well written :)

Thank you for the advice Moonlight i'm not a prof and i'm a new student of English literature, thanks for telling my mistakes.

I liked this as well the idea of describing life and how at times it can be scary with a cave. I thought it was very clever and yes I agree with moonlit candles if you just nake those small changes it will be flawless. :)

I thought this had great meaning in it :) I loved it