Hmm
"Arranged perfectly, you set us up as if doll's.
Re-writing our scrip's, to make the world see us as normal.
Even on our best day's, we're worse then any other."
Doll's---dolls
scrip's---scrips
day's---days
then---than
other than these its cool i love the emotion and the flow
good job still 5/5 =)

"Re-writing our scrips, to make the world see
us as normal..."
scrips--scripts
"Oven on high heat, our fight's incinerate our
love."
---I'd rather this was "Oven on high heat, our fight incinerates our love"
"Take 3 hated step's back, to every 1 loving
step forward."
---step's=steps. I've personally always didn't like poems with digits, but this one works, I like it
"Over andover, in waves, I'm drowning can't
you see?
Belonging some where else, but I will never
leave...
Eventhough I know... You, Me, are not to
be."
---the ending lines are superb, Jenn!!
"Not great"... Not great????? This is amazing. I love it :) Keep writing
-X