Okay ilove the imagery and the deep raw emotions there! oh btw u have some minor errors but then again when ur emotional that happens but over all i say it's awasome darling! :)

Wow I like the raw emotion in this poem. . . its a very painful piece . . . and its sad but I hope you are okay :( good poem. .

In my depth are cast out dreams
You ripped me apart at the steams

I really liked that part

and this poem is awesome!...Well, you know, in a devastating sort of way. It's so sad! Like this line;

At the start I was half
You made me whole

It just comes to show that the more the one you love has to build you up, the more they have to tear you down with. :(

Great Write, hon!

Very sad and emotional piece, like the flow of it