Comments : I'll Try to Fly

  • 12 years ago

    by Special K

    This is beautiful but full of sorrow.

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    The emotion is so strong and so sad too
    good poem
    well written 5/5 =)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Its a good poem. Well written, I mean. The style is basic, but its okay. The word choice was alright I guess and the emotion was strong. All in all nice job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hollow Face

    B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L
    My mother is the same way. It hurt me to read this but I realizd everything was so true. Good job. You made it your own and filled the words up with your sorrow.
    5/5
    ~Kitty

    • 12 years ago

      by Kitty Kurse

      Haha you go by kitty to, huh so odd:O x3 but thanks yeah its really hard to deal with my mom.. all the time its really stressful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jake

    ..........WOW....... this is beautiful! very very VERY deep and just slam packed with emotion.... I love it

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    This is really really good. I mean, I can feel it tugging at my heart.
    Last night I called you,"Mama,"
    You said,"Only my daughter calls me that. Your not my daughter."
    Just keep persevering and I am sure your mum would see that you have changed someday.