by Yakari Gabriel May 1, 2012
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
This poem was written for an Art Challenge |
by Lioness
I love this opening, it gives me an insight of what to expect in your poem. The idea of biting nails reminds me of myself. I do that when I have a lot of anxiety. The idea that the nails have grown does say at that moment, this person was content. |
by Maple Tree
You have written a powerful piece here.... I'm a grandma of 2 beautiful boys.... I call them my mocha babies :-) This poem reminded me when my daughter first told me of the boy who first stole her heart....although I wasn't like the mother in this poem.... I told her... I don't care if hes blue, or purple with polka dots... if he treats you good and makes you happy.... then I'm happy.... |