by tyler May 1, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Broken is the heart |
by Court
My only thing is it might flow better with "digs deep and grotesque", rather than deeper. Only critique I have. |
by LostWords
Now this is a great flowing poem! I love the slight repetition of things and the slants of rhyming. 5/5 |
by kida
Absolutely beautiful, got some tears in my eyes, well done keep writing because the stuff you write is really really good! |
by Angel
I can feel the emotion when i read this. it rhymed beautifully and it flowed together line after line :) definetaly a 5/5 :) |
by Rihanna
Wow so dark and filled with sad emotions |