Broken heart

by tyler   May 1, 2012


Broken is the heart

thats ripped from my chest

lie after lie

I've come to hate your caress

now night after night

i wreath in unrest

from lie after lie

digs deeper and grotesque

broken is the heart

cold as death

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  • 10 years ago

    by Court

    My only thing is it might flow better with "digs deep and grotesque", rather than deeper. Only critique I have.

  • 12 years ago

    by LostWords

    Now this is a great flowing poem! I love the slight repetition of things and the slants of rhyming. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by kida

    Absolutely beautiful, got some tears in my eyes, well done keep writing because the stuff you write is really really good!

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    I can feel the emotion when i read this. it rhymed beautifully and it flowed together line after line :) definetaly a 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Wow so dark and filled with sad emotions

    Broken is the heart
    Ripped from my chest

    ^
    So beautiful penned with deep emotions
    I felt the sadness in this poem<3

    Beautiful!
    5/5

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