Wow so dark and filled with sad emotions

Broken is the heart
Ripped from my chest

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So beautiful penned with deep emotions
I felt the sadness in this poem<3

Beautiful!
5/5

I can feel the emotion when i read this. it rhymed beautifully and it flowed together line after line :) definetaly a 5/5 :)

Absolutely beautiful, got some tears in my eyes, well done keep writing because the stuff you write is really really good!

Now this is a great flowing poem! I love the slight repetition of things and the slants of rhyming. 5/5

My only thing is it might flow better with "digs deep and grotesque", rather than deeper. Only critique I have.