She Took You Away From Me!

by CathyButterflyJC   May 1, 2012


She Took You Away From Me-April 30, 2012, Monday & May 1, 2012, Tuesday

I use to hate our break up.
I use to hold so many regrets;
Wishing I could go back in time,
And thought there was nothing left!
Thinking there was nothing worse,
Then losing your love!
It was a curse.
But then our friendship,
Was at stake!
Not just losing things like your hands!
A more painful thing fate was to take,
And more despair scattered the lands!
It wasn't our separation,
That tore us down!
But the condensation,
Fogging up your vision!
Is touring us apart!
Can we go back to the start?
When you didn't throw at me darts;
And I wasn't hit by the replacement cart!
I didn't have such a broken heart!
Now she's come into your life!
And more damage is done;
Then when you said our love was gone!
The break up didn't end this roughly!
I was bleeding;
But not this badly,
Because then I had your friendship!
You threw lies in my face,
And I'm bleeding under the surface!
I miss your embrace!
But at least I still had your face,
But now that's deserting!
So much pain you are bringing!
I didn't realize it was better;
Then your hands against my hip!
Your friendship was everything!
Even without a ring.
But now we're hanging on by a string!
Kindness,
Appreciation you use to see!
Laughter,
Smiles we use to bring!
But now she's taken away that!
Swooshed jealousy in a hat!
In my face.
And I have to ask,
On every surface?
What makes her so special?
You have to throw away!
Us all!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Losing a friend is never easy and it hurts
    especially caused by another person
    Very sad and nice written 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This was really good, it hurts to lose a friend.
    I like that you were able to incorporate rhymes whithin this piece also that the emotion of losing your friend was present at all times. Also I like that you told us What you are missing about him and how it was when you were still friends and how you are wondering what happened? What did she do or has done to end your friendship with your friend. :(

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    Wow iam speechless this is so sad how it turned to be losing your friendship cause of other person
    the emotion is so strong and so sad
    the word choice is amazing and fitting with each other
    the flow was cool
    i love this
    5/5 tho it deserve more =)