by mo3taz May 1, 2012
category :
Life, society /
about society
The wounds appear in an arranged future. |
This was really thought provoking. The ending really drew you in. Good job! |
by mo3taz
Thank you, :) |
by Moonlit Candles
I have to say this was an interesting poem. Feally liked the story that was told her and it came out nicely. Great job. :) I think you might have one little typo. I think you meant heart instead of hart. |
by Kate
I like how it starts out sad and sort of depressing but then becomes happy and positive in the end. Interesting twist. |