The biggest fears

by mo3taz   May 1, 2012


They were close but hidden in nowhere.
They were beneath, above and behind.
I could hear them whispering me to stare.
I stood up after their voice has died.
I screamed while i'm raged, is it fair?

i gave myself a deep look inside.
looking deeply while wondering the words where am I
suddenly, i heard a voice asking me to bide.
Its sad voice seemed like it doesn't lie.
my legs wanted to stay but my heart wanted to hide.

darkness around with voices combined
regretful thoughts came on my mind.
last line to start the biggest fears as it seems.
last stand to make a hope of mine.
last breath to say goodbye.

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  • 12 years ago

    by mo3taz

    Thank you, and the typo is corrected, thanks Moonlit.

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This was really neat. I liked how you structured this poem together. Thought th flow was good and it all looked well. One possible typo was you meant fair instead of fare. Great job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    Good :)

  • 12 years ago

    by mo3taz

    This poem is talking about what people feel when they are about to die, of course i have not been in such situation, but i thought it would be a good subject for a poem and i tried.
    of course your opinions and suggestions is important to me, thanks for reading.

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