This poem is talking about what people feel when they are about to die, of course i have not been in such situation, but i thought it would be a good subject for a poem and i tried.
of course your opinions and suggestions is important to me, thanks for reading.

Good :)

This was really neat. I liked how you structured this poem together. Thought th flow was good and it all looked well. One possible typo was you meant fair instead of fare. Great job. :)

Thank you, and the typo is corrected, thanks Moonlit.