Oh this is our love

I thought this poem was great. A little bit of help for you. Try to really think of words that don't seem forcedvto set a rhyme. Some of these seem that way. Maybe it's just me. And watch for some grammar errors. Such as change in line six "we" to "we're. And just watch syllables when rhyming. you don`t want one line with 4 syllables, then the next with ten. It doesn't flow as well. But all in all this was done great. Had a great message. Nice work. :)

I likd this. It had sad and happy moments in it and it did flow really nicely. One thing in the sixth stanza you got a little typo with the word understand. ;) but other than that I really enjoyed reading this. Nice job! :)

Nice writing here, I like the internal rhymes like:
sad/find, good job.

Have a look at you messages I have sent you one.

Good choice of words like the

"All the girls like to think of love,
So we smile and pretend to be a dove.

All of us sing a love song like larks,
When inside of us hidden million sparks."

Funny but sweet at the same time :D