There is someone who always kept telling me, poems with true feelings are always good, and I agree. This poem was really sad, I hope everything will be better:)

Let God handle this.. He will take the pain away and know that things do get better and that pain hurt etc doesn't last forever.. let God and time take control another awesome write because it expresses the true pain you feeling

Such a sad piece. full of emotions and brought tears from my eyes. excellent piece of writing.... may you live happy always.. good work

I can really see the sadness in every word you wrote hon. Its a really good flowing poem.

Keep it up Holly

Nice poem :), a really meaning full poem and expressed with heartfelt emotions, well written