Dnt knw ,y i hvnt read any of ur poem evr..
Too amazing they r, and bst part is dat i dont hv to go through dictionary to find d meanings..
Ur poem speaks fr itslf..

Another emotional and dark poem...the imagery is very clear to my mind..your poem is like having auditory hallucination--that there are voices teasing you or pulling you to do bad/unusual things..anyways, you hear these things because your drowning from feeling of alone...depression..stress and etc., that you feel there is no one can help/comfort you...

--by the way, the whole piece is amazing, you are talented...have a great potential and skills in writing poetry..keep up always the good work
rate here..deserve to vote
5/5:=)

What I would have liked is if at some point when talking about the voices you say something like," listen...can you hear them?" that's what I was feeling. something eerie making it more haunting rather than sad and tragic. still, it's fine as it stands.