Awh somehow I thought the ending was superb and a bit hopeful too, I like this poem its short but you can really tell it came from the heart.. and yeah tears that fall over loss is very hard stay strong...nicely written poem :)

Aw girl this is great another amazing poem by the amazing rihanna :)

Short and sweet. I liked the flow of it :)

5/5
Minerva (:

When it gets tensed up, then it's near.. Behind all 'goodbye', there's welcome.. After the rain, the sun will shine.. Good, good, good as always been good. Well done!

Well-penned here, another brilliant work..the poem is short but meaningful and full of feelings..really great!
5/5

The ending was my favorite part. Really hopeful for a piece with a hopeless start. Great job. Keep writing :)
-X

Well written lav. Dont worry, you will be saved, no matter what happens, you still have friends and family that will adore you always.

Good work here